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HEAVEN WHAT'S IT LIKE

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What's up guys, good morning to everyone, hope you had a great weekend . Well now I'm going to drop another poem for you guys this one is about heaven. I mean I'm not the only one that just sat a day and wonder how it's like up there right, we all wonder every once in a while what it's like up there in heaven and if it's even real in the first place so I just wrote a poem about it since I'm wondering  about it. Now as usual I'll explain the type of poem it is and the uses. So heaven was written using the rhyming poetry form, so in short it's a rhyming poem in which the end of each line rhymes or the end of each other line rhymes it can be split however you want but I always split mine in three stanzas each with four lines. Anyway no more time to waste on with the poem.

                                              Heaven


What is it like up there
will there be sorrow or pain 
can hearts still be broken
or with blood someone stained

Shall their be silver and gold mansions
will taxes still have to be paid
are homes going to be free for everyone
so that no one shall be on the streets

Can we find true happiness there
for both the young and old 
shall we actually see his face
in that wonderful city of gold
                                              By Frost Death

Well that's all until next time thank you for reading and bye 😁


Comments

  1. BggchezdttzydJuly 6, 2021 at 11:34 AM

    Lovely poem

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  2. UnknownAugust 12, 2021 at 12:09 PM

    What a curious poem

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  3. AnonymousMarch 23, 2025 at 7:58 AM

    The poem was lovely just felt like the middle verse could've ended with a rhyme as well

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